Your opening is not grammatically correct. I like the first sentence about Hanapepe being Kauai's biggest little town. That was on a sign someplace right? Redo the second sentence. You need more info for your points. In your point about Kauai's people being allowed to share their talents, you have just one interview of an author. What other talents are on display there? Where's the history of how it started? When did it start? How did it expand into what it is today? The red and the blue highlights are really hard to read. Can you change them to another color that's easier to read? Were you able to get more interviews?
I am in 7th grade in my school's Advanced Media class. I love this class and I have been having lots of fun in it. This past year we went to Florida, where STN was held. Next year it will be in San Diego, California.