Audio - Audio for the most part is well done. You have maybe one interview where it sounds like the mic wasn't plugged in or something because the background noise is just too loud. Other than that, your other interviews had good audio and you have some nat sounds in there which is good. Pay attention to the levels of each interview and your voiceovers. They aren't all at the same level. I did notice a few times in which the levels changed. You want them even throughout. If I had to give a grade for just the audio, it would probably be around a 3.7 or an A-.
Visuals - Interviews are shot really well. Some could use a little more light but I'm ok with it since it is an art "night". Some of your interior shots are a little dark which needed to be fixed but most of your stuff was lit well. There seems to be a lot of interior store shots and while that's part of the night, the action really is outside on the street. I feel you needed more shots of people walking and interacting outside. In one of the interviews at 1:04 she specifically says that one of things she really likes is when people are spilling out into the streets, buying food, and interacting with the vendors and you show clips of......the inside of a store. Match your b-roll which what's being said. Visuals are graded at 3.6 out of 4 which is an A-. Together your project is graded at 3.7 for an A-. Nice job!
I am in 7th grade in my school's Advanced Media class. I love this class and I have been having lots of fun in it. This past year we went to Florida, where STN was held. Next year it will be in San Diego, California.