I was concerned about what kind of story this would turn out to be but you've managed to put together something interesting. It's a little hard to understand what he says sometimes and you may need some subtitles but they can't be how they were at the start, showing just the words like you did. The harmonica is a nice touch to the story. Try not to reuse b-roll. The audio was pretty consistent throughout the story so nice job there. Interviews were done well although be careful that your subjects don't turn too much to the side. When talking about his hobbies that keep him busy, you stray a little when he talks about the seed company. Be sure to keep those separate. Overall I'd give this story an A-. Your hard work was evident here and while you have some things to work on, you did some things really well.
I am in 7th grade in my school's Advanced Media class. I love this class and I have been having lots of fun in it. This past year we went to Florida, where STN was held. Next year it will be in San Diego, California.